[Lnc-business] Director of Development posting

[Caryn Ann Harlos]

Some grammatical suggestions:

Second paragraph:  liberty loving should be hyphenated

6th point on what you'll do and 2nd point in about you: Needs Oxford commas
after "met" and "sound judgment"  (and judgment is misspelled as judgement)

In the ending diversity paragraph - omit commas after (LNC) and "staff" in
the first sentence.  Needs Oxford comma after "promote" in the fourth
sentence.  Needs period at the end of the last sentence.

*In Liberty,*

* Personal Note:  I have what is commonly known as Asperger's Syndrome
(part of the autism spectrum).  This can affect inter-personal
communication skills in both personal and electronic arenas.  If anyone
found anything offensive or overly off-putting (or some other social faux
pas), please contact me privately and let me know.  *



On Sat, Jul 13, 2019 at 10:41 AM Daniel Fishman via Lnc-business <
lnc-business at hq.lp.org> wrote:

> Thank you Joe, I will include those elements, outstanding suggestions
> ---
> Daniel Fishman
> Executive Director
> The Libertarian Party
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>
> On Sat, Jul 13, 2019 at 11:40 AM Joe Bishop-Henchman via Lnc-business <
> lnc-business at hq.lp.org> wrote:
>
> > Two suggestions:
> >
> > If we continue to permit the position to be either remote or in
> > Alexandria HQ, we should note that. Ability to remote work is a plus
> > that we shouldn't hide.
> >
> > I'm generally a fan of including a salary range. This article concisely
> > and humorously summarizes the reasons better than I ever could:
> >
> >
> https://nonprofitaf.com/2015/06/when-you-dont-disclose-salary-range-on-a-job-posting-a-unicorn-loses-its-wings/
> >
> > JBH
> >
> > ------------
> > Joe Bishop-Henchman
> > LNC Member (At-Large)
> > joe.bishop-henchman at lp.org
> > www.facebook.com/groups/189510455174837
> >
> > On 2019-07-13 11:16, Daniel Fishman via Lnc-business wrote:
> > > I intend to put this on the website tomorrow, and would appreciate a
> > > last
> > > eye towards typos and grammatical errors.
> > >
> > > Thanks
> > > ---
> > > Daniel Fishman
> > > Executive Director
> > > The Libertarian Party
> > > Join Us <http://www.lp.org/join>
> >
>