[Lnc-business] Director of Development posting

[Daniel Fishman]

Thanks!

On Sun, Jul 14, 2019, 3:00 AM Caryn Ann Harlos <caryn.ann.harlos at lp.org>
wrote:

> Some grammatical suggestions:
>
> Second paragraph:  liberty loving should be hyphenated
>
> 6th point on what you'll do and 2nd point in about you: Needs Oxford
> commas after "met" and "sound judgment"  (and judgment is misspelled as
> judgement)
>
> In the ending diversity paragraph - omit commas after (LNC) and "staff" in
> the first sentence.  Needs Oxford comma after "promote" in the fourth
> sentence.  Needs period at the end of the last sentence.
>
> *In Liberty,*
>
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>
>
> On Sat, Jul 13, 2019 at 10:41 AM Daniel Fishman via Lnc-business <
> lnc-business at hq.lp.org> wrote:
>
>> Thank you Joe, I will include those elements, outstanding suggestions
>> ---
>> Daniel Fishman
>> Executive Director
>> The Libertarian Party
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>>
>> On Sat, Jul 13, 2019 at 11:40 AM Joe Bishop-Henchman via Lnc-business <
>> lnc-business at hq.lp.org> wrote:
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>> > Two suggestions:
>> >
>> > If we continue to permit the position to be either remote or in
>> > Alexandria HQ, we should note that. Ability to remote work is a plus
>> > that we shouldn't hide.
>> >
>> > I'm generally a fan of including a salary range. This article concisely
>> > and humorously summarizes the reasons better than I ever could:
>> >
>> >
>> https://nonprofitaf.com/2015/06/when-you-dont-disclose-salary-range-on-a-job-posting-a-unicorn-loses-its-wings/
>> >
>> > JBH
>> >
>> > ------------
>> > Joe Bishop-Henchman
>> > LNC Member (At-Large)
>> > joe.bishop-henchman at lp.org
>> > www.facebook.com/groups/189510455174837
>> >
>> > On 2019-07-13 11:16, Daniel Fishman via Lnc-business wrote:
>> > > I intend to put this on the website tomorrow, and would appreciate a
>> > > last
>> > > eye towards typos and grammatical errors.
>> > >
>> > > Thanks
>> > > ---
>> > > Daniel Fishman
>> > > Executive Director
>> > > The Libertarian Party
>> > > Join Us <http://www.lp.org/join>
>> >
>>
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