[Lnc-business] Director of Development posting

[Johnny Adams]

Thanks


On Sat, Jul 13, 2019 at 11:59 PM Caryn Ann Harlos via Lnc-business <
lnc-business at hq.lp.org> wrote:

> Some grammatical suggestions:
>
> Second paragraph:  liberty loving should be hyphenated
>
> 6th point on what you'll do and 2nd point in about you: Needs Oxford commas
> after "met" and "sound judgment"  (and judgment is misspelled as judgement)
>
> In the ending diversity paragraph - omit commas after (LNC) and "staff" in
> the first sentence.  Needs Oxford comma after "promote" in the fourth
> sentence.  Needs period at the end of the last sentence.
>
> *In Liberty,*
>
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> On Sat, Jul 13, 2019 at 10:41 AM Daniel Fishman via Lnc-business <
> lnc-business at hq.lp.org> wrote:
>
> > Thank you Joe, I will include those elements, outstanding suggestions
> > ---
> > Daniel Fishman
> > Executive Director
> > The Libertarian Party
> > Join Us <http://www.lp.org/join>
> >
> >
> > On Sat, Jul 13, 2019 at 11:40 AM Joe Bishop-Henchman via Lnc-business <
> > lnc-business at hq.lp.org> wrote:
> >
> > > Two suggestions:
> > >
> > > If we continue to permit the position to be either remote or in
> > > Alexandria HQ, we should note that. Ability to remote work is a plus
> > > that we shouldn't hide.
> > >
> > > I'm generally a fan of including a salary range. This article concisely
> > > and humorously summarizes the reasons better than I ever could:
> > >
> > >
> >
> https://nonprofitaf.com/2015/06/when-you-dont-disclose-salary-range-on-a-job-posting-a-unicorn-loses-its-wings/
> > >
> > > JBH
> > >
> > > ------------
> > > Joe Bishop-Henchman
> > > LNC Member (At-Large)
> > > joe.bishop-henchman at lp.org
> > > www.facebook.com/groups/189510455174837
> > >
> > > On 2019-07-13 11:16, Daniel Fishman via Lnc-business wrote:
> > > > I intend to put this on the website tomorrow, and would appreciate a
> > > > last
> > > > eye towards typos and grammatical errors.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks
> > > > ---
> > > > Daniel Fishman
> > > > Executive Director
> > > > The Libertarian Party
> > > > Join Us <http://www.lp.org/join>
> > >
> >
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